What would a 15 week
Kutz, Groden, and Zamel course look like? Write a paragraph about each
teaching unit. What kinds of actvities might we see? What kinds of
reading/writing might we see? How might students develop as writers?
Be sure to ground your ideas in the text.
A 16-week semester would probably focus on ethnography and discourse
communities. Primary texts, at first, would be writings the students produce
themselves. Students are asked to view their writings as part of class research
on the nature and uses of language and to find connections between their own
writing and their classmates’ work. Other texts range from ethnographic studies
(in addition to those produced by the students), memoirs about culture and
language acquisition, and literature that depicts discourse communities within
cultures (ex: Toni Morrison, Mark Twain).
It is difficult for me to ground specific “writing skills” that will be
covered based on the text because the authors so clearly push against any
formal/traditional curriculum for writing instruction. I can’t envision these
teachers presenting a lesson on paragraph structure or FANBOYS, though perhaps
I can conceive of them doing a lesson on organization, either through outline
modeling the board or literal cutting and pasting (get out your scissors and
tape!) in class of the students’ drafts into more organized units (a lesson in
building the narrative or argument according to what the writer wants to focus
the reader’s attention on).
I’m also struggling to come up with a “Unit 5,” probably because I’ve
only read through chapter 7 of the text. I hope the book eventually gets to a
culminating project that the students get to complete. Perhaps I could
extrapolate that they eventually move into more formal research, but I may just
be stealing that idea from our next text, Facts,
Artifacts and Counterfacts.
Unit 1. Rather than starting with
a straight personal narrative (as many FYC classes do), students tell a story
to the class then write it out. They reflect on how the story changed between
telling and writing. How was the story told differently to the class compared
to the usual setting in which it is told? 4-page paper includes their written
account of the story and their commentary/reflection on when and why they
usually tell the story and how it changes when put in writing.
Unit 2. Students choose a discourse
community to observe and research. This should be a community they encounter
often but is outside their home. Possibilities include church, work, a coffee
shop, a group they belong to (sports team or campus club), restaurant they
frequent, etc. Students will listen in on and transcribe excerpts of
conversations. How is language used in this community? Is it functional or
evaluative (transactional vs poetic)? 4-pages of writing will consist of field
notes, observations and conclusions about the community.
Unit 3. Ethnographic work now
moves to the home, be that family, roommates or close friendships. Students
record storytelling in this community and transcribe one or two stories. They
then write the story out for the class as an audience. These stories are
reproduced and given to each student as a collection. Split class into groups
and ask different groups to focus on different elements of the collection: recurrent themes, how the story functions,
types of language, etc. 4 page essay at
the end of this unit involves describing the use of their story in their family
then extending that to a broader discussion of the use of language (giving
examples of other stories from the class that served similar functions).
Unit 4. More writings are brought
in relating to other discourse communities. Short stories and memoirs about
contact groups, perhaps, and some literacy narratives. Students are asked to
extend their new knowledge beyond their own social circles into broader
discourse communities. Discussions of race and culture are brought into play
now. How is language a function of culture—the way it is created by the culture
and signals one culture to another, the clashes when rules of discourse
communities clash, etc.
I agree with you that it's difficult to design for a student-centered course that strives for dialectical inquiry rather than writing skills. How do we engage in classroom activity? I don't pretend to have an answer to this, but I think the answer might lie in "inquiry" itself. How does someone make an inquiry? Think of the steps one takes to make an inquiry in the context of chapter four of DOC and have the students do that in class.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you that it's difficult to design for a student-centered course that strives for dialectical inquiry rather than writing skills. How do we engage in classroom activity? I don't pretend to have an answer to this, but I think the answer might lie in "inquiry" itself. How does someone make an inquiry? Think of the steps one takes to make an inquiry in the context of chapter four of DOC and have the students do that in class.
ReplyDeleteI like your 'ethnographic' focus on studying discourse communities (a course theme?). It seems to logically move to connect school discourse community, to that of an external environment (i.e coffee shop, park, restaurant) to home discourse community (come around full circle) as the units progress. I might introduce the importance of race and culture of different 'discourse communities' in Unit One, however, when introducing and brainstorming about what discourse communities are and how they work...
ReplyDeleteI really like that you added the question to the top of the blog so that I can compare it to what you wrote. That was helpful :) I worked with a remedial course where the students worked on ethnographs' and discourse community. So, your ideals are really practical and possible. I think that ethnographs will really help the students process their community and build a classroom community. I also valued the personal narratives. Great ideas.
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